martedì 24 novembre 2009

On writing 'Sometimes'

I'm still uncertain about the end. I've written The wind pushes them. I was wondering if it could be better to write something like They are pushed by the wind or The wind move them or In their movements there's wind.
Might it be better just don't write anything and finishing on the branches?
Any suggestions are welcomed!

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